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Triad In 7 Beats

Morning Jewels Morning jewels, webbed display Glistened dewdrops gently sway Sunrise gems this perfect day 2/21/17 Written for: Triad in 7 Beats Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:27:00 PM

Upbeat, great imagery and movement. Congratulations on your win Chris! :-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/28/2017 4:38:00 AM

This is beautiful, Chris, I somehow missed reading this before, a 7:) congratulations on your well deserved win too:)

Chris Green
Date: 2/28/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Jo so much. Your kindness is always a wonderful gift o me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:41:00 PM

very beautiful, Chris. Congrats on the win.

Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thanks so very much Andrea

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:30:00 PM

Coming back with congrats, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thank you so very much Agnes

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 11:29:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Jan.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 10:23:00 AM

chris, how you wove this verse beautifully is impressive... i was taken by ' sunrise gems ( gems as a verb) as this gave more impact to your piece... thanks for being part of this challenge as i send my sweet congrats!..huggs

Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2017 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much Nette for your kind words. It was my honor to participate.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2017 2:00:00 PM

So beautiful, especially the last line.Saw the image, and this describes it so well.

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 2:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Charmaine.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2017 8:34:00 PM

Beautiful, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Kim. :)

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 2/21/2017 7:45:00 PM

You hit it on the nose. looks like a winner. GL.

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Janis.

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/21/2017 5:01:00 PM

Very pretty and descriptive, Chris! Should do well in the contest :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Laura. I appreciate your kindness but geez, each of the entries I have read for this this contest are all so beautiful. They just blew me away.