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Triad In 7 Beats

Morning Jewels

Morning jewels, webbed display
Glistened dewdrops gently sway
Sunrise gems this perfect day


2/21/17
Written for: Triad in 7 Beats Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2017

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Mark Martin Date: 3/12/2017 4:27:00 PM Upbeat, great imagery and movement. Congratulations on your win Chris! :-) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 2/28/2017 4:38:00 AM This is beautiful, Chris, I somehow missed reading this before, a 7:) congratulations on your well deserved win too:) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/28/2017 8:26:00 AM Thank you Jo so much. Your kindness is always a wonderful gift o me.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2017 6:41:00 PM very beautiful, Chris. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM Thanks so very much Andrea

Agnes Krampe Date: 2/26/2017 2:30:00 PM Coming back with congrats, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM Thank you so very much Agnes

Jan Allison Date: 2/26/2017 11:29:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Chris:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/27/2017 8:32:00 AM Thanks so much Jan.

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/26/2017 10:23:00 AM chris, how you wove this verse beautifully is impressive... i was taken by ' sunrise gems ( gems as a verb) as this gave more impact to your piece... thanks for being part of this challenge as i send my sweet congrats!..huggs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/27/2017 8:31:00 AM Thank you so very much Nette for your kind words. It was my honor to participate.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/22/2017 2:00:00 PM So beautiful, especially the last line.Saw the image, and this describes it so well. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/22/2017 2:05:00 PM Thank you so much Charmaine.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/21/2017 8:34:00 PM Beautiful, Chris! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/22/2017 8:07:00 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 2/21/2017 7:45:00 PM You hit it on the nose. looks like a winner. GL. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/22/2017 8:06:00 AM Thank you so much Janis.

Laura Leiser Date: 2/21/2017 5:01:00 PM Very pretty and descriptive, Chris! Should do well in the contest :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/21/2017 5:04:00 PM Thanks so much Laura. I appreciate your kindness but geez, each of the entries I have read for this this contest are all so beautiful. They just blew me away.

Joseph May Date: 2/21/2017 3:17:00 PM Beautiful gem Chris.. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/21/2017 4:04:00 PM Thanks so very much Joseph.

Agnes Krampe Date: 2/21/2017 2:15:00 PM Oh, that is a beautiful one! "Morning jewels" sounds perfect. Good luck in the contest, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/21/2017 2:36:00 PM Thanks so very much Agnes, you are too kind. Yours was beautiful. :)

Darren White Date: 2/21/2017 1:53:00 PM Wow, love this entry, it's perfect :) Good luck Chris! Login to Reply Darren White Date: 2/21/2017 10:34:00 PM That may be so to YOUR eyes, but everyone reads differently, sponsors too :) Chris Green Date: 2/21/2017 2:35:00 PM Thanks so much Darren, but you should read the others...mine is like a drab washcloth to some of them.

Jan Allison Date: 2/21/2017 1:44:00 PM Very beautiful Chris:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/21/2017 1:46:00 PM Thanks Jan, but, the competition in this one is fierce from what I have seen already. I almost didn't enter. :)