Chris Green Poet Verse

Triad In 7 Beats

Morning Jewels

Morning jewels, webbed display
Glistened dewdrops gently sway
Sunrise gems this perfect day


2/21/17
Written for: Triad in 7 Beats Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Mark Martin March 12, 2017 at 4:27 PM Upbeat, great imagery and movement. Congratulations on your win Chris! :-)

Joanna Daniel February 28, 2017 at 4:38 AM This is beautiful, Chris, I somehow missed reading this before, a 7:) congratulations on your well deserved win too:) Chris Green February 28, 2017 at 8:26 AM Thank you Jo so much. Your kindness is always a wonderful gift o me.

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2017 at 6:41 PM very beautiful, Chris. Congrats on the win. Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 8:32 AM Thanks so very much Andrea

Agnes Krampe February 26, 2017 at 2:30 PM Coming back with congrats, Chris. Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 8:32 AM Thank you so very much Agnes

Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 11:29 AM Dropping back with my congrats Chris:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 8:32 AM Thanks so much Jan.

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2017 at 10:23 AM chris, how you wove this verse beautifully is impressive... i was taken by ' sunrise gems ( gems as a verb) as this gave more impact to your piece... thanks for being part of this challenge as i send my sweet congrats!..huggs Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 8:31 AM Thank you so very much Nette for your kind words. It was my honor to participate.

Charmaine Chircop February 22, 2017 at 2:00 PM So beautiful, especially the last line.Saw the image, and this describes it so well. Chris Green February 22, 2017 at 2:05 PM Thank you so much Charmaine.

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2017 at 8:34 PM Beautiful, Chris! Chris Green February 22, 2017 at 8:07 AM Thank you Kim. :)

Janis Medders Tobechi February 21, 2017 at 7:45 PM You hit it on the nose. looks like a winner. GL. Chris Green February 22, 2017 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much Janis.

Laura Leiser February 21, 2017 at 5:01 PM Very pretty and descriptive, Chris! Should do well in the contest :) Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 5:04 PM Thanks so much Laura. I appreciate your kindness but geez, each of the entries I have read for this this contest are all so beautiful. They just blew me away.

Joseph May February 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM Beautiful gem Chris.. Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 4:04 PM Thanks so very much Joseph.

Agnes Krampe February 21, 2017 at 2:15 PM Oh, that is a beautiful one! "Morning jewels" sounds perfect. Good luck in the contest, Chris. Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 2:36 PM Thanks so very much Agnes, you are too kind. Yours was beautiful. :)

Darren White February 21, 2017 at 1:53 PM Wow, love this entry, it's perfect :) Good luck Chris! Darren White February 21, 2017 at 10:34 PM That may be so to YOUR eyes, but everyone reads differently, sponsors too :) Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 2:35 PM Thanks so much Darren, but you should read the others...mine is like a drab washcloth to some of them.

Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 1:44 PM Very beautiful Chris:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 1:46 PM Thanks Jan, but, the competition in this one is fierce from what I have seen already. I almost didn't enter. :)