Trepidation Into Nature

The ant is one who works all day
and barely sleeps at night
Seldom is he, if ever
fearful of an unjust or a losing fight

He lives to serve a queen
and she he seldom sees
but he is hers in mind and soul
to do with as she please

She dictates and rules to all her breed 
with a simple yes or no
for she is the queen and her word is law
this we all know to be so.

But the queen behind her mask she sneers
at the knave of an ant and all his peers
who work all day and through the night
and fight the battle of a losing fight
and believe that because of her
what they do is right
Yes, we are all like ants one and all
constantly ignorant of our own minds' call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gondolf Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Since you wrote this in 1969, you and I are of the same generation, and these words still hold meaning today. I wonder if they will still be relevant a generation from now.
Flynn Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:35 AM
The Ant lives on....long live the ant...
Hoffman Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Wow! So apt for today. Since you wrote this in 1969, seems things never change for the better. Brilliant piece.
Flynn Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 5:32 AM
thanks...
Flynn Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Thanks for your kind words....this is my Opus Magnum for mankind....
Zottola Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Can't argue that thought! And worst of all the ant can't break away from the group. Hope we can. Congrats and welcome to soup.
Flynn Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 5:38 AM
The Queen is metaphorically ex- President Nixon and the ant is your average Soldier....this was written in 1969....i was 21 at the time, the mood was such. I do feel it applies to current events today, especially the Iraqi debacle.
Lwele Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Impressive
Flynn Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:26 AM
Thank you....
Shahzad Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 8:31 PM
great
Flynn Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Thanks....
Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Your "Trepidation into nature" is a creative write. Have a blessed day writing away.........
Flynn Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Thanks...
John Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:33 AM
I enjoyed this, so thank you, Paul. I served a queen, too, once - a long time ago. She was a bee, though. However, did she sneer as she peered. Not sure! :)
Flynn Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:26 AM
Thanks......
Alex Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 8:45 AM
"we are all like ants one and all" - Yeah! Some time or the other! Congratulations!
Flynn Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Thanks...
Mcconnell Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Lovely pen Paul with good rhyme and flow, Blessings, Gordon
Flynn Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 8:22 AM
thanks..came to me spontaneously in 1969.....providing security on a nuke loaded B-52 while serving in SAC.....guard duty was always lonely..given to reflection...
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