Trees Refuse To Reveal the Distance

TREES  REFUSE TO REVEAL THE DISTANCE



Limes  lie,  slim elms smile :  
Lime Isle lies miles.


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Note
 
Every word in this verse is composed of letters in 
the word  MILES, each letter used only once per word.

I asked the lime and elm trees  how far away the Lime Isle was, and 
this is the vague  response I received.

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Entered in Paula Swanson's Contest  "Miles"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 7, 2012 at 10:29 AM
SIDNEY,,,,;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN PAULA'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Miles" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Bunton Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Congratulations!
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:07 AM
How clever. Well done. Congratulations
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Congrats on your win with this very unique approach to the contest...very creative. Blessings, Rhonda
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March 3, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Cool write my friend. Michael
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