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Trees On a Slope By a River

A bicycle path along the river wends beside the edge of trees Planted there to keep the soil from sliding down in nth degrees The sassafras is from the middle part of North America Right by it sits the Trembling Aspen fluffy seed that fly then fall It's done with planning in an office so people can walk safe and free So they can stroll beside the river and never think of plant disease Because if one plant gets a sickness all the others of it's kind will bend under the natural illness and denude the landscape when they die
ABCB DEFE GBHB IJKJ 1/16/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/3/2012 10:17:00 PM
very colorful. i liked it very much. keep up the good work! cant wait to read some more of your writing.
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Date: 3/14/2012 4:30:00 AM
a well-written piece from a style and content perspective, madeleine.... deep reflections of the environ; much enjoyed! thanks for stopping by and hope we can exchange views more often.. :) huggs!
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:23:00 AM
Enjoyed ang good poem Madeleine. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:52:00 PM
Lovely esp the last sentence...Patrick
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Date: 2/1/2012 12:48:00 PM
Nice write :-)
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Date: 2/1/2012 4:35:00 AM
Madeleine great use of imagery here, thanks for your comments..David
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:28:00 AM
Very nice good image created there x
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:46:00 AM
Enjoyed my visit thanks for sharing Declan xxx
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