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Trees In The Breeze

Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves, they will not tell the story they weave. Birds sit in their nests, with the little ones chirping and mom finding no rest. The trees are full of beautiful blossoms, look quickly it is awesome. Spring has now sprung, so I am feeling very young. I wanted my first line to read, "Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves - From the poem, The last goodbye written by Vijay Pandit." Written Date: 4/14/2020 3 Place Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup poet - Vijay Pandit Contest Judged: 5/3/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 5/3/2020 6:40:00 AM
Nice to feel like spring.. nice take on the line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/3/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. I did not know I had won. I am honored. So glad you like it. Oh Yes, Spring is in the air. Have a wonderful day.......