Trees In the Breeze
Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves, they will not tell the story they weave. Birds sit in their nests, with the little ones chirping and mom finding no rest. The trees are full of beautiful blossoms, look quickly it is awesome. Spring has now sprung, so I am feeling very young.
I wanted my first line to read, "Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves - From the poem, The last goodbye written by Vijay Pandit."
Written Date: 4/14/2020
3 Place Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup poet - Vijay Pandit Contest Judged: 5/3/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One
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