Trees and Deers

Chop chop chopping down the trees in the forest                                          
 there goes a deer by the door                                                           
because they are          
chop chop chopping down the trees in the forest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Marie. It was a very enjoyable poem though sad. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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March 26, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Poor deers they pass by your door to let you know they need a home. Nice, thanks
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Interesting observation..Reminds us to be more conservative..Sara
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