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trees have shed their sheen forlorn limbs stretch heavenward garlanded with snow Entry for Tania Kitchin's "A Late Fall Or Early Winter Haiku" Contest (4 Nov 2019) Rated No. 2 in the contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 7:00:00 AM

Lovely, Robert. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 8:13:00 PM

And now your garland has earned you another garland, a wreath of victory in the contest. Congrats, Bob! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2019 1:02:00 AM

Lovely haiku Bob, I especially love the final line:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2019 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 4:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Bob ... autumn is over and winter is ready ... lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2019 7:49:00 PM

that last line is so pretty! Congrats on the great win, Robert.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 7:08:00 PM

Nice haiku Robert, Congrats on your win...sending blessings to you dear friend. Hope all is well.. Charlie

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 4:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Robert with your beautifully penned haiku, thanks for participating!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/7/2019 5:52:00 PM

Thank you, Tania, for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win. I look forward to participating in other contests you may sponsor - BobH

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/7/2019 1:29:00 PM

That time of year when snow blankets everything - we rarely have snow in South Africa - perhaps once every 6 or 7 years, love picture postcards, documentaries and films that depict a pending white Christmas. Great write Robert! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/4/2019 7:12:00 PM

Love that image-laden last line - 'garlanded with snow' -- and such a creative garland at that, i.e., all-white! Beautifully written, Bob! Warm wishes, Gershon

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/4/2019 4:45:00 PM

Nicely described :)

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/4/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you, Casarah. I don't usually write Haiku but thought I would give it a shot. Nice to hear from you and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H