Treehouse

I have a second house
The tree house
Me and my friends likes to play in it
Even my friends are  only a little bit
It is fun to play with them
As happy as you got a gem
But sadly
We have no more energy
The electricity was broken
It already happen
We cant fix it
Like your getting hit
But that’s fine
Cause the owner of the electricity have to pay the fine
For Ruining the fun
While we’re eating a bun.

(Sorry guys, I was only 10 years old when I made this and my English was terrible ??)

friendshiprhyme

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beata Agustin

October 12, 2024 at 10:20 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.