Home » Poems » Michael Jordan » Tree of Love

Tree of Love

two lovers pick-nick
a place of remembrance
loneliness of love

-------------------------
Written for Raul's haiku
Contest, God Bless

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/11/2009 8:04:00 AM

Whatever you write is loaded ... the emotions seep like rain.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2009 9:14:00 AM

Nicely written. Sara

Nivitha Ann Paul

Date: 8/8/2009 4:18:00 AM

hey ur name is to sweet.. thanku for the comment and blessing

Ed Coet

Date: 7/11/2009 3:17:00 PM

I just love a really good haiku. This hits the mark. Well done Michael. Well done. -ED-

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2009 7:43:00 AM

Good Morning Michael and good luck in the contest. You are an exceptional writer and I must say it was a joy to read your poem. Thank you for your kind remarks on my writing. My prayers are with you that your health does improve. We both know that with God everything is possible. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/10/2009 12:41:00 PM

My Dearest Michael, Awe YOU have stolen my idea for Raul's Contest Good Luck ALWAYS.HG Mike I must Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on "Thank-YOU-- To my LOVES" I have half a dozen drafts of This POEM With all the Favorable comments I'm Glad I wrote it I know of YOUR Faith in the LORD and that Pride is sinful but I am Proud of this POEM once again Thank-YOU Mr. President of the Cool name Club Always...HG

Kristopher S. Kern

Date: 7/9/2009 5:16:00 AM

I like this one tree of love hey,thanks for commenting on my poem it just flowed out... my mother really likes it... I'm gonna read it to my grandmother later on today... Kris didn't write it God did... hope your surgeries are going well... I'll say a prayer for yah... God Bless brother

Brian Strand

Date: 7/9/2009 12:02:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/8/2009 12:18:00 PM

Very nice haiku Michael, and I had to giggle right out loud when you said you got the same of kind of love, if that is true then yes, you are blessed as well! Thank you always for your welcome comments and good luck in the contest! Tru

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/8/2009 11:06:00 AM

How memories affect us! This captures the mood of "once was" quite eloquently. Yours Matthew Anish

Mary Duhart

Date: 7/5/2009 6:33:00 AM

Well done. Thanks for commenting on my work also.

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/3/2009 9:25:00 PM

great write!

Willow Dray

Date: 7/3/2009 1:59:00 PM

I dont get it big dan

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 6/30/2009 5:33:00 PM

wat a lovely haiku.....this is just beautiful....good luck in the contest!....love n smiles Maryam*

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2009 5:25:00 PM

beautiful mirror into your amazing world! Michael, well done, and good luck in the contest! jim

Michaela Payne

Date: 6/30/2009 4:24:00 PM

This is such a sweet Haiku Michael! I really have missed being on here, I'm sorry for not being around and stuff. Maybe I'll email you later, but anyway. this was beautiful! Stay Blessed Michael. YF4L~Michaela~

Heidie Buys

Date: 6/30/2009 4:18:00 PM

So beautiful and so well written. Best of luck. Regards Heidie