Tree of Love

two lovers pick-nick
a place of remembrance
loneliness of love

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Written for Raul's haiku
Contest, God Bless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Whatever you write is loaded ... the emotions seep like rain.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Nicely written. Sara
Paul Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 4:18 AM
hey ur name is to sweet.. thanku for the comment and blessing
Coet Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:17 PM
I just love a really good haiku. This hits the mark. Well done Michael. Well done. -ED-
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Good Morning Michael and good luck in the contest. You are an exceptional writer and I must say it was a joy to read your poem. Thank you for your kind remarks on my writing. My prayers are with you that your health does improve. We both know that with God everything is possible. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
Esquire Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 12:41 PM
My Dearest Michael, Awe YOU have stolen my idea for Raul's Contest Good Luck ALWAYS.HG Mike I must Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on "Thank-YOU-- To my LOVES" I have half a dozen drafts of This POEM With all the Favorable comments I'm Glad I wrote it I know of YOUR Faith in the LORD and that Pride is sinful but I am Proud of this POEM once again Thank-YOU Mr. President of the Cool name Club Always...HG
Kern Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 5:16 AM
I like this one tree of love hey,thanks for commenting on my poem it just flowed out... my mother really likes it... I'm gonna read it to my grandmother later on today... Kris didn't write it God did... hope your surgeries are going well... I'll say a prayer for yah... God Bless brother
Strand Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 12:02 AM
Best wishes with this one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Rider Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Very nice haiku Michael, and I had to giggle right out loud when you said you got the same of kind of love, if that is true then yes, you are blessed as well! Thank you always for your welcome comments and good luck in the contest! Tru
Anish Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 11:06 AM
How memories affect us! This captures the mood of "once was" quite eloquently. Yours Matthew Anish
Duhart Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Well done. Thanks for commenting on my work also.
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 9:25 PM
great write!
Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 1:59 PM
I dont get it big dan
Haniff Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 5:33 PM
wat a lovely haiku.....this is just beautiful....good luck in the contest!....love n smiles Maryam*
Goff Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 5:25 PM
beautiful mirror into your amazing world! Michael, well done, and good luck in the contest! jim
Payne Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 4:24 PM
This is such a sweet Haiku Michael! I really have missed being on here, I'm sorry for not being around and stuff. Maybe I'll email you later, but anyway. this was beautiful! Stay Blessed Michael. YF4L~Michaela~
Buys Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 4:18 PM
So beautiful and so well written. Best of luck. Regards Heidie
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:55 PM
I love that each poet has made this picture their own.....you have filled your eyes with love! Nicely done, Michael ! ~ Carrie
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