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Treated Defeated

Now he’s stopped and not forgetting he’s wailing petty nonstop and getting no help no pity inside he’s broken shutting down no means of coping no one around No love shown to him hell bound never known loves bliss cracked perspective no care not missed Doesn’t want to live thoughts selective he’s in a dire life refusing suicide to stay alive and cry the cry the cryer cries day and night to no reply worth belief pride demise no point all died Once a nice selfless guy never approved or liked damaged the nice supply as no one took his side opposite and sly think they can boss his mind why they allow him in their life blind to realise why he fulfilled requests act nice or that he decides each time as they think they lead and light the way he likes yet he lets them because they need this prize competing minds needing pride while he’s content inside and gifts them light to keep them high by his side then all denied nor took his cries seriously unkind out to manipulate his mind but in his pain he’s wise realise his strength and size those who mock and say he lies asserting the alpha emerge and rise stand big with evil eyes a man too demand never warn twice suddenly they treat him kind tell a joke but he wants to fight his expense too many times hostile surprise violent type pounce and strike dominate for life he will do as he pleases Jesus all you, a friend, had to do was believe him I was shown no empathy no respect no care or belief no value no worth no confidence just grief at a time I was targeted bullied slandered too no relief I am now the guy you treated me On my side, ha My friends my family defeated me, I'm my side

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Date: 2/14/2020 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win Nick. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day!
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