Treasuring Indian Summer

On lips heartfelt goodbye kiss
Soaking up the last few warm sunrays
Summer bliss fades to memories



Wordku: 5-7-5 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentile Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Love this one Line and your sentiments I do wholeheartedly share!! Happy Saturday xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.
Mcguire Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 1:35 AM
It wont be long until the white death is upon us. But I love the winter over the summer. Love this one good job
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy. I do love fall especially after the record hot summer we've had.
Kiser Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Yes and I hate to see it go. Well penned.
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Thanks, ML. Right you are.
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 9:28 PM
I did this a lot till about three years ago when I cut way back on my "laying out" days. I should try to get at least 12 min. of sun each day though. Most of my vitamin D comes from pills!!
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 9:45 PM
I think the last time I sunbathed in my bikini was close to 20 years ago. Need I say more LOL
Canerdy Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Good haiku, Line--from one whose favorite season is FALL! :-) Janice
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Janice. Happy Fall !!
Wheatley Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Simple but sweet.
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Alycia.
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