Treasure-Trail

Abysmal bass blows holes mid-air,
celestial beings break bones.
It upsets the balance, and takes control.

"Stare up with me"
the air gets thick
like a translucent Saviour.
"Breathe in and release,
feel it rescue every temple in your body"

We obey.

Our necks are crooked,
stalking the rain with our eyes,
waiting for every bead
to sting as it explodes.


Climbing to the peak of ferocious stone gods.

You feel it in the back of your head

taking colossal steps,

up and up.

"Some thing's about to happen"

Anxious butterflies attack your stomach,

lifting primal energy

up and up.

Surge of electricity.

Abandoning simplicity.

Keep climbing
up and up.

"If we fall, its over"

CONFUSION
fights
FREEDOM.

ONE LAST STEP



"I think we made it"


We explode into sub-atomic beams of light,
spreading infectious positive energy
to all with open ears.
Hold on tight to skeletal boundaries,
throwing ourselves into 
plump, fabric clouds.
"We are so beautiful"

Caution took the exit,
jealous in all this confusion,
one wrong step,
and you fall.
Failing to climb the air with your feet,
desperation greets you with an iconic smile

Minds collide.
Identities collapse.
Limp, they crawl under hostile rocks.
Freedom breaks free and

you feel the warmth
of a smile.

Brings you back down,
to buried animalistic tendencies
and the treasure-trail to happiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 11:35 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Hi Rob, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Sheart Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Hi Rob, Amazing poetry you have written here. Deeply moving. Much talent!! I want to welcome you to Poetry Soup. We're all amongst friends here. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Thanks so much for sharing. Here's to the treasure-trail to happiness, many blessings to you. Take care, Love Light Patty
Burton Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 8:27 AM
wow that was good, gotta read this again. Enjoyed your poetry and have a great day.:):)
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Welcome to soup. There is much to read and do here. Keep your creative and imaginative pen flowing for I look forward to reading your work. Sara
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 3:25 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rob. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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