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unrhumed couplets

Inside the oceans current channelling energy begins combing deep sands awakening feelings soar high Within a deep fountain appearing dressed in liquid light brighter than the sun your brilliance shines straight through Crown of awareness to see into the heart where there is no in between geography Supreme bliss enters cosmic universal powers timeless living visions in a precious gift wrapped soul

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2018 10:22:00 PM

Your amazing poem is lit with meaningful words that capture an elusive higher vibration Liam. I loved every word! Congratulations on your deserving poem being honored with POTW! : )

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2018 3:25:00 PM

Congrats liam, for poem of the week!

Donna Loughman

Date: 2/18/2018 12:04:00 PM

Liam, congratulations on POTW! Well deserved for this heartfelt poem! Have a blessed week my friend:-)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/18/2018 9:33:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations on potw:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/10/2018 4:09:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Donna Loughman

Date: 2/10/2018 3:51:00 PM

“timeless living visions in a precious gift wrapped soul” timeless poem that touches the heart....thank you:-) Donna Maria

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2018 3:47:00 PM

such beautiful couplets Liam I especially love the imagery in the second one:-) hugs jan xx