Treasure Of One Moment


When the light fades gently upon the end of day 
the sun hangs so still, it appears made of clay 
Treasuring each moment draped in sunset's  glow
I linger like the rustling whispers of a quiet bay ! 

When peaceful grace of evening suddenly descends   
illumined by its radiance, I'll soothingly transcend 
Entering realms of soul and heart 
I'll enter in its chamber just like a work of art  

When mother nature finally comes to greet me   
I will seize this Sacred moment an consider myself free     
Rising like the eagle, I will soar across the sky 
with everlasting breath until I finally cross the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Alhemaidy Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Treasure indeed! Lovely read! Have a nice time :-) Best wishes and regards!
Rose  Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Hello there dear Abdullah, thank you for visiting my page :)
Narain Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Strong & evocative imagery You bring in sunset, clay-like sun, quiet bays, soaring eagles — these are vivid images that help the reader “see” and feel the transitions from day to evening, and from earth to sky. That transition from grounded (sun, clay, bay) to free (soaring eagle, crossing sea) is nicely handled.
Rose  Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Your comment is brilliantly exposed on my page Jay, thankyou for your presence here.
Leake Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Enjoyed your rhyme Mystic Well written Best wishes Kevin
Rose  Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Thank you dear Kevin for commenting, have a blessed day :)
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 2:30 AM
- A lovely and peaceful poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Thanks dear Anne, hope your keeping well :)
Hind Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 10:16 PM
Lovely! We all need this :)
Rose  Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:54 AM
thankyou for your visit dear Paige
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