Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Treasure Me-Collab

If I were a statue
made of glass from the sea 
Would you gaze upon the shards
to see my inner beauty

I would stand up tall, gaze longingly
At the sun on your face, 
bright as stars could be
A frozen form, glistening lovingly 

Caress me slowly there is no hurry
Yield to the cracks of times great fury
Every facet, every shine, with all its beauty
This statue made of treasure, glass from the sea




*And another beautiful Collab with Germaine Pasley* 6-10-12

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Laura Breidenthal August 21, 2012 at 7:24 PM This was SUHWEET. Love the collaberation--amazing job. :)

Ivy Vresk June 20, 2012 at 4:19 AM there is no better way to start new day but with a such a well writen and romantic poems as your's,thank you Dan,my day just stared, Ivy

Elizabeth Wesley June 14, 2012 at 10:49 PM Yes Danny boy, I do treasure you and assure you are definitely not a statue. Your inner beauty shines in every comment you make and I wonder what I'd do without you. This poem is a caress to all who read it! Love, Elizabeth Dan Kearley June 14, 2012 at 11:27 PM ;o) Thank you as always my dear... :o) For without you what would I do?

Carma Sanderson June 14, 2012 at 3:36 PM Awwwweee!!!! This is a beautiful piece, Dan. Carma Dan Kearley June 14, 2012 at 11:22 PM Thanks Carma! :o)

Gwendolen Song June 13, 2012 at 9:03 PM Hiya Dan! This is a new poet, Germaine. A superb collab that makes me escape the business of the day...refreshing feel. Great job to the BOTH of ya! Gwendolen Dan Kearley June 14, 2012 at 11:21 PM Well thanks,Gwendolen :o) Ya,she needs to get writing more...Ha,ha. Thanks for your kind comments,as always ;o)

Black Eyed Susan June 12, 2012 at 9:49 AM very beautiful! this has a great flow to it and I love the picture it paints. I really like the last stanza's 1st 2 lines - delicate and slow and getting to know it, accepting the cracks :) Dan Kearley June 14, 2012 at 11:14 PM Thank you...Very much :o)

Mad Hu June 12, 2012 at 1:21 AM Very delicate poem and thanks for yorr comments:) Dan Kearley June 14, 2012 at 11:12 PM Thank you :o)

Jonas L. Rozario June 10, 2012 at 3:52 PM Going to my fav...absolutely wonderful!!! Dan Kearley June 11, 2012 at 12:26 AM I am honored Jonas,Thank you very much! I hope to write more.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2012 at 1:29 PM Yes, another beautiful collab from both of you!!!! - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise Dan Kearley June 11, 2012 at 12:17 AM Thank you always...Anne Lise :o) f.e.f oxox