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Treacherous, Their Ways

Treacherous their ways without sunlight's rays Paths of sleet and ice break our limbs in a trice Youths may look, leap and laugh Elders dare not make this gaffe

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Date: 3/11/2023 8:43:00 PM
The rower has put some strength in the step, but I know better than to go acting like I’ve got a new set of springs. Pop goes the tendon at our age! Hope you are well, enjoyed this!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2023 8:56:00 PM
No more spring for me -- in either my step or the weather... Here's hoping for a return of both! Excelsior! :) gw

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