Joanna Daniel Poet tristich

Travelling With the Light

As the s h a d o w of  life lengthens .................
             s h a d o w
each day of travel is suspense -

but the Light of the world strengthens.






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Afzal Nusker January 18, 2017 at 10:06 PM Amazing and very deep.

Janis Medders Tobechi January 18, 2017 at 2:12 PM Very profound, Jo and I know how that light strengthens, everyday. Good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux January 17, 2017 at 8:28 AM Without light we would have no shadows. I enjoyed your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2017 at 3:56 AM - A beautiful poem, Jo - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 4:40 PM this is an outstanding verse, Jo, I need to try this form..

Demetrios Trifiatis January 16, 2017 at 10:26 AM When travelling with the light there is no fear of darkness my dear friend, Jo! Excellent my friend!

Chris Green January 16, 2017 at 9:19 AM There is always light for without the light, there would be no shadows. Another beautiful piece of writing Jo.

Probir Gupta January 16, 2017 at 5:43 AM A nice touch of philosophy ...

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2017 at 5:12 AM There is always something new to learn with poetry. I have not seen this form before. You did well Jo! : ) 7

Supraja Kannan January 16, 2017 at 4:24 AM Great one... I have'nt seen this form before... You did very well...A 7...