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Travelling With the Light

As the s h a d o w of life lengthens ................. s h a d o w each day of travel is suspense - but the Light of the world strengthens. 01~16~17

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/18/2017 10:06:00 PM

Amazing and very deep.

Janis Thompson

Date: 1/18/2017 2:12:00 PM

Very profound, Jo and I know how that light strengthens, everyday. Good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/17/2017 8:28:00 AM

Without light we would have no shadows. I enjoyed your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2017 3:56:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Jo - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2017 4:40:00 PM

this is an outstanding verse, Jo, I need to try this form..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/16/2017 10:26:00 AM

When travelling with the light there is no fear of darkness my dear friend, Jo! Excellent my friend!

Chris Green

Date: 1/16/2017 9:19:00 AM

There is always light for without the light, there would be no shadows. Another beautiful piece of writing Jo.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/16/2017 5:43:00 AM

A nice touch of philosophy ...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2017 5:12:00 AM

There is always something new to learn with poetry. I have not seen this form before. You did well Jo! : ) 7

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/16/2017 4:24:00 AM

Great one... I have'nt seen this form before... You did very well...A 7...