(Entry for the Jill Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest, sponsored by Charles Messina, submitted October 30, 2024 - Third Place)
There's a sweet young lady named Jill for whom travel is such a big thrill. She sees many places and lots of kind faces in Asheville, Nashville, Seattle and Seville, Belleville, Louisville and Copacabana, Brazil!
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