Travel

Travel

Traveling beyond outerspace
Treated to just amazing sights
Talk to aliens face to face
Teased by most outstanding delights
Tantalize immortality 
Turn dreams into reality 
Takes us to another new place.

6/6/2018
Pleiades poetry contest 
Sponsored by Joseph May.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Oh yes! This is a great Pleiades! Congratulations on your win.
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Susan, I find this form interesting, prefer six syllables per line though, thanks again for your support much
Gupta Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 12:39 AM
I like this very much ... You have brought out a surreal ambience ... Congratulations, Roy ...
Pett Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Probir, I appreciate your support and encouragement my friend. :))
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Very nicely done on the travel theme, Roy. Congrats for your win.
Pett Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Andrea, your support is really appreciated. :))
May Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 4:07 PM
A celestial journey with all the sights..Congrats on your win Roy..
Pett Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:11 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations, my placement and giving me the opportunity to support your contest. :))
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:52 AM
I would love to be able to travel to distant stars.
Pett Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Richard, I totally agree it would be fascinating. :))
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:36 AM
- Would be fun to talk to aliens ... impressive great, Roy - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and best wishes, I’m not sure how we would react if we met an alien but it would be interesting, thanks again for your support. :))
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Keep the good thoughts Roy, well done and best wishes in the contest...
Pett Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 3:04 AM
Thanks Charlie for your very kind comment and best wishes much appreciated. :))
Talbot Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 7:34 PM
I wish I could be more optimistic, loved your poem though, good luck in the contest! Mick
Pett Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Mick for your very kind comment and best wishes, I think we all live in hope but we must stay as positive as much as we can, thanks again for your support my friend. :))
Shaw Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 1:44 PM
A wonderful little poem, 7 lines for seven sisters, A cosmic journey, good luck in the contest, regards, Kevin
Pett Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Kevin for your very kind comment and best wishes, also thank you for seeing the slight relation of my poem to the form, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Wouldn't it be amazing Roy, probably not in our lifetime but in years to come it will be the norm ... not sure about meeting aliens though lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much Jan, definitely not in my lifetime lol, it would be nice to think that there are some nice aliens somewhere out there, though we would probably kill them anyway, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Sands Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:10 AM
This is a great one for the contest Roy! Well done :)
Pett Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, I do enjoy this form but found it more difficult with eight syllables instead of six, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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