Travel

Travel Traveling beyond outerspace Treated to just amazing sights Talk to aliens face to face Teased by most outstanding delights Tantalize immortality Turn dreams into reality Takes us to another new place. 6/6/2018 Pleiades poetry contest Sponsored by Joseph May.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/25/2018 3:31:00 PM

Oh yes! This is a great Pleiades! Congratulations on your win.

Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 5:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Susan, I find this form interesting, prefer six syllables per line though, thanks again for your support much

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/23/2018 12:39:00 AM

I like this very much ... You have brought out a surreal ambience ... Congratulations, Roy ...

Roy Pett
Date: 6/24/2018 4:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Probir, I appreciate your support and encouragement my friend. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 4:32:00 PM

Very nicely done on the travel theme, Roy. Congrats for your win.

Roy Pett
Date: 6/24/2018 4:12:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Andrea, your support is really appreciated. :))

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2018 4:07:00 PM

A celestial journey with all the sights..Congrats on your win Roy..

Roy Pett
Date: 6/24/2018 4:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations, my placement and giving me the opportunity to support your contest. :))

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/9/2018 8:52:00 AM

I would love to be able to travel to distant stars.

Roy Pett
Date: 6/9/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Richard, I totally agree it would be fascinating. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 7:36:00 AM

- Would be fun to talk to aliens ... impressive great, Roy - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 6/9/2018 5:02:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and best wishes, I’m not sure how we would react if we met an alien but it would be interesting, thanks again for your support. :))

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/7/2018 11:36:00 AM

Keep the good thoughts Roy, well done and best wishes in the contest...

Roy Pett
Date: 6/8/2018 3:04:00 AM

Thanks Charlie for your very kind comment and best wishes much appreciated. :))

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/6/2018 7:34:00 PM

I wish I could be more optimistic, loved your poem though, good luck in the contest! Mick

Roy Pett
Date: 6/7/2018 5:25:00 AM

Thanks Mick for your very kind comment and best wishes, I think we all live in hope but we must stay as positive as much as we can, thanks again for your support my friend. :))

Kevin Shaw

Date: 6/6/2018 1:44:00 PM

A wonderful little poem, 7 lines for seven sisters, A cosmic journey, good luck in the contest, regards, Kevin

Roy Pett
Date: 6/6/2018 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Kevin for your very kind comment and best wishes, also thank you for seeing the slight relation of my poem to the form, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2018 11:36:00 AM

Wouldn't it be amazing Roy, probably not in our lifetime but in years to come it will be the norm ... not sure about meeting aliens though lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 6/6/2018 11:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan, definitely not in my lifetime lol, it would be nice to think that there are some nice aliens somewhere out there, though we would probably kill them anyway, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2018 11:10:00 AM

This is a great one for the contest Roy! Well done :)

Roy Pett
Date: 6/6/2018 11:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, I do enjoy this form but found it more difficult with eight syllables instead of six, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))