Traumatic Memory

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I was fixed in front of my parent's grave. They were quiet as the tomb was interned. There were only two people that were brave. I was fixed in front of my parent's grave. We have no soothing words or blooms to save They shared their emotions, and I feel burned. I was fixed in front of my parent's grave. They were quiet as the tomb was interned. Written: May 10, 2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2023 12:53:00 PM

Such a melancholy write. Well done!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/10/2023 12:11:00 PM

Hello Sotto, I agree with Vijay, we have memoriies of our loved one. After all they were part f our lives. They will always be in our memories. sotto enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/10/2023 8:10:00 AM

Death of our beloved is a memory that stays with us forever. Grief, mourning also churn emotions.