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TRAUMA Twist the knife, Riddled with her innocence, Against her sweet nectar. Untimely budding, Mastered by machination, unimaginable Aberration of rose’s robbery ~ thorns remain intact. 9/13/2021

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Date: 9/14/2021 3:40:00 PM
Very evocative write..I see “exploitation “ well defined here..A rose that symbolizes the femininity, the fragile aspect of life …the thorn as courage and perseverance that no matter what happen..will continue to fight..I love this poem..A fave for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2021 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, JCB
Date: 9/14/2021 4:10:00 AM
Admirable Acrostic, my dearest friend, Kim. Blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2021 4:58:00 AM
Thank you ~ hugs
Date: 9/13/2021 10:46:00 PM
Great contrast between fine roses and thorns. However know that there are rose plants that do not develop thorns, Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2021 5:00:00 AM
Poem is about the pain…the thorns left for a lifetime after she has been attacked. God bless.

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