Trapped In Limbo

Trapped in limbo, 
Not moving ahead 
Never looking behind; 
Suspended in that single moment of time. 

Not moving ahead, 
Suspended in that single moment of time, 
Never looking behind, 
Trapped in limbo. 

Note: this poetry form is an Ungalino. First stanza: 1/2/3/4, second stanza repeats as lines 2/4/3/1.
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Goff Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Good work Chetta!
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April 23, 2024 at 6:24 PM
Thank you
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October 7, 2021 at 2:56 PM
I like that form a lot. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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October 7, 2021 at 3:21 PM
You are most welcome.
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