Trapped In Limbo

Trapped in limbo,
Not moving ahead
Never looking behind;
Suspended in that single moment
     of time.

Not moving ahead,
Suspended in that single moment
     of time,
Never looking behind,
Trapped in limbo.

Note: this poetry form is an Ungalino.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 11:22 PM
Perfect content most suitable for chosen form. Well done, Deborah. Sometimes I wish I had a button to pause time, don't we all.
Lawless Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Very intriguing form Deborah. It reads seamlessly....
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