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Trapped In Denial Limbo

I was trapped in denial limbo as my Dad
Drifted into the depths of dementia
                                            No! It can't be!
                                            Why him? Why us?

Lost in a labyrinthine maze of helplessness
And disbelief trying to make sense of it 
"Not my healthy, gracefully aging Dad!
He'll beat this disease!," I kept on telling myself

Soon, I stopped believing my lies
He's been gone over a year now

                              Rest in peace, Dad
                               Love you so much! 
                                                              


Fragmented Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Broken Wings- Dear Heart 
Theme: Denial
Date written and posted: 06/24/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Shaw Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Wow Edward, what a great line "Lost in a labyrinthine maze of helplessness" A powerful little verse, Good luck in the Fragmented Verse contest, regards, Kevin
Ibeh Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Thank you so much, Kevin!:-) I appreciate the support!
Wheatley Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:37 PM
So heartfelt. Sorry for your loss.
Ibeh Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much for your condolences and visit, Alycia!:-) God bless...
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