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Trapped In a Second Forever

A dark square cave, full of dangling colors and lights, i had no fear, you were there, full of care, but i admit in foresight, i saw it lean, i saw it wane, i saw it DIE! all before me! Yet i was still in bliss. Too foolish to see that once light came, and the birds would sing, that then would be the final kiss. If only i was trapped in that second forever....and not this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/26/2010 8:17:00 PM
this is past my imagination, And the tittle is outstanding, an awesome write, Nick. Well done on the ending, it would be nice to be trapped in that one thought forever,..p.d.
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:35:00 PM
Nice images to express
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Date: 5/14/2010 1:48:00 PM
It seems you are.......... love will rise again like a phoenix! Line 4 (too) Light & Love
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