Trapped In a Second Forever

A dark square cave, full of dangling colors and lights, i had no fear, you were there, full of care, but i admit in foresight, i saw it lean, i saw it wane, i saw it DIE! all before me! Yet i was still in bliss. Too foolish to see that once light came, and the birds would sing, that then would be the final kiss. If only i was trapped in that second forever....and not this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 26, 2010 at 8:17 PM
this is past my imagination, And the tittle is outstanding, an awesome write, Nick. Well done on the ending, it would be nice to be trapped in that one thought forever,..p.d.
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May 14, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Nice images to express
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May 14, 2010 at 1:48 PM
It seems you are.......... love will rise again like a phoenix! Line 4 (too) Light & Love
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