Revel Bellion Poet Lanterne

Trapped

Boxed
                                                      With air
                                                    All around
                                                   Yet I still go:
                                                       'Gasp.'

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Kim Rodrigues October 12, 2016 at 6:35 AM Congrats! Revel Bellion October 14, 2016 at 12:42 PM Thanks, Kim!

Beautiful Scars October 11, 2016 at 12:00 PM wonderful lanterne Lingges...congrats on your placement :)-luloo Revel Bellion October 14, 2016 at 12:41 PM Hey Laura, much appreciated! Right back at you:)

Jan Allison October 10, 2016 at 6:27 PM many congrats Lingges:-) hugs Jan xx Revel Bellion October 11, 2016 at 2:16 AM Thanks, Jan! Right back at you:)

Ironic Zink October 10, 2016 at 5:02 PM Congratulations on your placement in my competion! Excellent job. Ironic Zinc Revel Bellion October 11, 2016 at 2:17 AM Thank you for holding the contest in the first place:) much appreciated!