Trapped

I feel like I am trapped in an air tight tomb
No light or hope here …. Just me
Waiting to be spilled from this rancid womb
I need to be set free

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Sara Kendrick

October 7, 2009 at 5:18 AM

You have expressed here what so many feel today. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 22, 2009 at 5:24 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us James. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

September 21, 2009 at 10:11 PM

Perhaps fears of what is outside this rancid womb may be the trap, a womb is usually a place of comfort, perhaps you are trying to describe a prison, looking for a way to escape. Nice write, easy to relate to. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.