Trapped

The distant echo
of my lost awareness
rings the canyon walls

No clear way out
one final shout
—benighted to recall

(Dreamsleep: September, 2023)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goyal Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 9:38 AM
I like the way that you expressed being trapped, "The distant echo of my lost awareness rings the canyon walls", this part was very interesting to read. Nicely penned -AG
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September 16, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Thanks
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