Trapped

struggle
emblazoned on
eyelids of gossamer
soft cobwebs, woven in secret
the fly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Young Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 10:31 AM
captivating image in your poem ;)
Bryan Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Haha, great comment : ) way to build on the imagery. Thanks a lot!
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