Shirley Hawkins Poet Rhyme

Trapped

My life is so depressing
I feel trapped, in need of space
I need some fresh air to breathe
A gentle breeze touching my face
A taste of freedom to make me feel whole
Instead of suffocating in this human goldfish bowl









14 March 2020

Number 3

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Eve Roper March 17, 2020 at 1:34 AM Shirley, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Shirley Hawkins March 17, 2020 at 1:45 AM Thank you for your kind comment and the hug I appreciated both very much... I hope all is well with you and yours ...Shirley

Jenish Somadas March 15, 2020 at 12:05 AM human goldfish bowl... wonderful lines.. Conveyed the message beautifully.. Shirley Hawkins March 15, 2020 at 12:52 AM Thank you Jenish. The lovely picture of the goldfish bowl certainly helped me write it ...