Trap

Coughing quite a lot
The sickness can never stop
In it I am caught
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:57 AM
Jen - I hope you get better soon - Nice haiku - God Bless MJ
Loving Iii Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 5:05 PM
we suffer the same timely illness you and i. get well soon. john
Ehigiator Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Nicely done, I have felt this way many times over...God Bless*Tyesha
Ehigiator Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Nicely done, I have felt this way many times over...God Bless*Tyesha
Haniff Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 3:52 PM
nice haiku.....thanx for the comment...love Maryam
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