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Transubstantiation

eyes on the runners
boom……………
sweat to blood
on the sidelines
Patriots Day


Kathryn McL. Collins
April 28, 2013

deathi do not know?

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Laura Breidenthal

December 3, 2013 at 12:43 AM

This hit home! Incredible stuff you have-thanks again for sharing. : ) Always, Laura

Jack Horne

May 5, 2013 at 2:56 PM

love this powerful write, my friend. Thanks for reading so many of my poems

Sara Kendrick

May 5, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Enjoyed reading your great work this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..I am glad that you too have seen a Indigo Bunting..They are a beautiful bird..Sara

Terry O'Leary

May 3, 2013 at 12:53 PM

Kathy... a poem with impact! Very concise... very nice... Terry ( I guess that was one of those words you were threatening me with... ;-) )

Daver Austin

April 30, 2013 at 12:36 PM

Wow! Great title. A lot said in a very few words. This one drenches the reader. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

April 30, 2013 at 9:38 AM

Kathryn, this is a very sad image. Not expect, for such a day... thank you for liking my Grandpa poem... I did argue with my fiance. After he reassured me on how that poem fits the bad poems, going on in the blogs. thank you very much... Linda

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 30, 2013 at 8:56 AM

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Keith Bickerstaffe

April 30, 2013 at 8:38 AM

'...sweat to blood on the sidelines,' '...BOOM,' stark images of what transpired in Boston on that fateful Patriots Day. An incredibly powerful piece. Well done Kathy!! Love, Keith

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