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"Close your eyes, fall in love, stay there." Quote from Rumi Peach Tree Orchard Those blossoms Bees come alive, pollinate all Warm air wraps it shawl, sooths the soul, transports mind away

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/22/2024 12:17:00 PM

This amiable and excellently written Fibonacci persists from the first to the last line. The significance of the quote cannot be overstated. Excellent work.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 12:50:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the you reading it. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/22/2024 11:38:00 AM

Oooh i think this one is my favourite fib from you.. love the imagery..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 12:50:00 PM

I am glad that you like it, SO. Close your eyes and see. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2024 9:45:00 AM

So pretty, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 10:20:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/22/2024 8:05:00 AM

oh, I could feel the warmth of spring as I read your poem. Lovely and heartwarming. I especially liked 'Warm air wraps it shawl, sooths the soul, transports mind away. Those lines spoke to me. Have a great day, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 8:06:00 AM

I am glad that you liked it and it touched you, Sara B. I hope your day is awesome. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/22/2024 7:09:00 AM

beautiful, .delightful, yann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 8:03:00 AM

Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K