Transparent Energies

Burnt into your memory
the cascading paths of two seperate lives
One so rich colourful and ambient
the other feels such emotion
whenever the distant memory ingrained
is unleashed to rome like a pagan
in this life it feels so powerful
a robust energy, it opens her soul
the transparent energies
build her up like a roming gypsy
two perceptions become like a whole
a new understanding is rewritten
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 6, 2010 at 9:36 AM
strong again here my friend
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