Alan Shapiro Poet Rhyme

Translucent Romance

Translucent Romance 

The sound of a love ,
Like the flight of a dove ,
As she soars through the skies,
Like a verse rhyming high,
That might make her cry ,
Like a beautiful sigh ,
Just meant for one ,
As written when done ,
Beyond its high pitch,
Like a spell sewn stitch by stitch ,
As she's meant to sedate,
To determine your fate ,
As her thoughts first translate,
To Gods precious state , 
From a prayer to a wish ,
To loves prayer from the abyss ,
As our lips tender remiss ,
To a beautiful kiss ,
They may need an assist ,
As sometimes beauties amiss ,
So give me a chance ,
For the hope of romance ,
Because I can't let you go ,
My heart needs you so ??

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Joel Hawksley December 30, 2024 at 8:39 PM While the relentless rhyming might not appeal to all readers, it serves a specific purpose in this poem, creating a sense of energy and enthusiasm that perfectly matches the speaker's passionate feelings. You’ve successfully used this technique to create a lighthearted and sincere expression of love and longing. It’s a charming and engaging piece.