Translucent Epiphany

Translucent Epiphany

‘Kismet’ he thought ‘What nonsense please smooch my elbow for real’
He had no time for Karma as things are what they are without coincidence
Only believed in solutions for problems and none of that psychic garble
No slips of compunction no Higher Power no confidence in contemplation

When he tripped his fuse on life’s vagaries and fell down an obvious sinkhole
He stumbled hit rock bottom and fractured his Ego and arm in so many places
She threw him a rope made of silken dreams woven with innocent thread for his
Veiled blinkers to disentangle when her Kiss Met his virginal lips through the light

04th July 2018

8 lines of Fate contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 9:46 PM
A very witty poem, Kai. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
Neumann Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Thank you Line
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 12:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. Awesome! Clever and well written. Well done!
Neumann Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Thank you Susan.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:46 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 2:42 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Great title Kai... I liked your clever take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Neumann Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Thank you Silent One. Kismet kisses the days...
Neumann Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 2:48 AM
Thank you Silent One. Kismet kisses the day. XXX
Gupta Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 11:05 PM
This is just brilliant ... rich aesthetics ... Something to return to time and again ... Thank you for liking my Silent Clouds ....
Neumann Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 2:50 AM
Thank you Probir.
Man Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Kai.. you are so gifted!
Neumann Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Thank you so very much. That is a huge compliment... I think I needed that today.
Messina Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Very well written Kai...Best of luck in the contest…Charlie
Neumann Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Thank you Charles. Positive affirmation received for today. Many wishes, Kai
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Nicely penned Kai...fate in poetic verse...love & light...^WW^
Neumann Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior. The fight with 'coincidence' goes on...
Godwin Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:12 AM
I know original and unique are synonyms but my spontaneous adrenaline rush over your write simply doesn't care. My joy and delight took me here deliberately, I'm thinking. All the best ... CayCay
Neumann Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Thank you and thank you. That is a huge compliment. I really appreciate that. XXX
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