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Translucent Epiphany

Translucent Epiphany ‘Kismet’ he thought ‘What nonsense please smooch my elbow for real’ He had no time for Karma as things are what they are without coincidence Only believed in solutions for problems and none of that psychic garble No slips of compunction no Higher Power no confidence in contemplation When he tripped his fuse on life’s vagaries and fell down an obvious sinkhole He stumbled hit rock bottom and fractured his Ego and arm in so many places She threw him a rope made of silken dreams woven with innocent thread for his Veiled blinkers to disentangle when her Kiss Met his virginal lips through the light 04th July 2018 8 lines of Fate contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 9:46:00 PM

A very witty poem, Kai. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/22/2018 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Line

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/21/2018 12:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Awesome! Clever and well written. Well done!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/21/2018 3:05:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2018 7:46:00 AM

- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/20/2018 2:42:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine Smile.

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 7:24:00 AM

Great title Kai... I liked your clever take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/20/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Kismet kisses the days...

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/20/2018 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Kismet kisses the day. XXX

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/5/2018 11:05:00 PM

This is just brilliant ... rich aesthetics ... Something to return to time and again ... Thank you for liking my Silent Clouds ....

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/20/2018 2:50:00 AM

Thank you Probir.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/4/2018 10:29:00 PM

Kai.. you are so gifted!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2018 1:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much. That is a huge compliment... I think I needed that today.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/4/2018 10:17:00 PM

Very well written Kai...Best of luck in the contest…Charlie

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2018 1:49:00 AM

Thank you Charles. Positive affirmation received for today. Many wishes, Kai

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2018 7:56:00 PM

Nicely penned Kai...fate in poetic verse...love & light...^WW^

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2018 1:55:00 AM

Thank you Winged Warrior. The fight with 'coincidence' goes on...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/4/2018 6:12:00 AM

I know original and unique are synonyms but my spontaneous adrenaline rush over your write simply doesn't care. My joy and delight took me here deliberately, I'm thinking. All the best ... CayCay

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2018 1:56:00 AM

Thank you and thank you. That is a huge compliment. I really appreciate that. XXX