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She took a warm sheet of blanket,
created from everything the river of time
covering her children from the feet,
to the neck.
The blanket carried dreams which seeped
into their minds,
teaching them the ways of time.
They dreamed, grew, and learned. As they grew,
the blanket slowly slid to their feet,
soon disappearing to the mist of timelessness
on the floor.
After they woke up,
none of them knew how to make the blanket of time;
they only knew what it carried,
and why they were covered.......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 3/28/2017 7:22:00 PM
    Very deep and well written. Congratulations on your win in this competitive contest. Blessings, Janis.

  1. Date: 3/19/2017 4:43:00 PM
    ...from the depths of the river of time. Thanks for entering the contest with this thought provoking tease.

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi
    Date: 3/19/2017 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Welcome, John. I'm really glad you enjoyed my work!!! ;-)
  1. Date: 3/9/2017 5:36:00 AM
    A deeply profound write, Teddy. T.J

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi
    Date: 3/10/2017 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, T.J!! :-)