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Transient Glow

My gaze is lost in brushed delight Of prism ray that sails afar Across a mountain peak divide All hushed, against one shooting star, With tints of orange and mild- reds. Each creature halts in voiceless awe While I, another soul enthralled By wonder owned by godly hands, As dappled sceneries unfold Like celestial glow of lore On this twilight the legend holds My native heart in transient pose. Admiring wave of glittered veil, I leave my heart as time forgoes A blinking vista etched on bone. Leon Datu Nette Onclaud--- Brief Unforgettable Moment 11/20/13

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Date: 12/28/2013 11:47:00 AM
Leon, it was nice reading this moment from you... Excellent in every way... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2013 12:17:00 PM
wow reading your poetry is awesome. this was amazing,
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:37:00 PM
This work has great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Sara
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