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Transformed

A golden sun tops the black trees Soon to warm fog's blanket The cool morn's air will be transformed And dew's diamond's facets The roosters enjoy the cool air Join in chorus singing Entertain the birds all around The crows' caws join ringing Striated whispy clouds cover The sun's bright white beaming Will clouds clear, hot sun heat the day Or will gray stay streaming? Written:Monday, July 29, 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/31/2013 4:09:00 PM

This is good Sara. I too wonder what will happen. I want some rain and nice cool days. It is awful hot here in Texas. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Donna Jones

Date: 7/31/2013 10:00:00 AM

You describe your feelings and mood very well Sara....

Alfonce Choi

Date: 7/31/2013 4:54:00 AM

Now let me as you, what is this that insipires you to write so much with such lovely real imaginations Sara?

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2013 11:04:00 PM

"Will clouds clear, hot sun heat the day Or will gray stay streaming?" that is the apparent question! Though I have to say, we've had beautiful weather here for the last week, or week and a half! Simply gorgeous, Great Work!!