Transformed

A golden sun tops the black trees
Soon to warm fog's blanket
The cool morn's air will be transformed
And dew's diamond's facets

The roosters enjoy the cool air
Join in chorus singing
Entertain the birds all around
The crows' caws join ringing

Striated whispy clouds cover
The sun's bright white beaming
Will clouds clear, hot sun heat the day  
Or will gray stay streaming?

Written:Monday, July 29, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 4:09 PM
This is good Sara. I too wonder what will happen. I want some rain and nice cool days. It is awful hot here in Texas. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Jones Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 10:00 AM
You describe your feelings and mood very well Sara....
Choi Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Now let me as you, what is this that insipires you to write so much with such lovely real imaginations Sara?
Sivey Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 11:04 PM
"Will clouds clear, hot sun heat the day Or will gray stay streaming?" that is the apparent question! Though I have to say, we've had beautiful weather here for the last week, or week and a half! Simply gorgeous, Great Work!!
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