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Transformation

transformation pollywogs paddle about her five year old toes frogs in the making summer kissed her cheek awesome faces peer from leaves freckles blooming now at the waters edge bullfrogs baroom a mating call dusk whispers secrets pie shop sells lemon apple and boysenberry poison berry to us blankets on cool nights hudson bay soft wooly warm loons serenade child

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John Fleming

Date: 10/11/2017 8:43:00 AM

I rather like this one as well, Patricia; it has a "child-like-innocence" attached to it...whispers of happy days from long ago. Very nice! :) john

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 4:54:00 PM

Thank you John.

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/3/2017 8:46:00 AM

lol ... what a grand entry ... your ball room gown is stunning dear ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/3/2017 11:35:00 AM

My ballroom gown consisted of bare feet and a well worn bathing suit but it was all I needed. Thanks Timothy

Darren White

Date: 8/26/2017 10:03:00 AM

Wonderful! I love this series of haiku :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/26/2017 10:46:00 AM

Darren thank you for your comment.

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/26/2017 2:53:00 AM

Hi Patricia , wonderful weather report :)) great description of changing seasons ::))))hugs

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/26/2017 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Niall. There are so many more could have gone on forever. I truly loved that old place.