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I saw it in the deep river of red, and goose bumps arose on my flesh. Stepping in to the cool, cool water, I sunk deeper surrounded in spirits matter. Currents took me by the hand pulling me further across the land. I came upon this light of blue rejoicing as away my ego flew leaving me free to take spirits hand. I walked with spirit for a long, long while, relishing the benevolence with my peaceful smile. He spoke of things that I held within my soul; A kindness and gentleness was my true goal. He showed me the truth from his lightness of being a picture of forgiveness for all living beings. It was only here that we would find a pureness of love to carry us during this time. I thanked spirit gladly then returned back to shore. Gale Lynne

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Date: 9/8/2012 11:28:00 PM
i like this poem of yours...awesome write friend Gale...thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:43:00 PM
Wow, absolutely beautiful! Just glorious in it's simplicity.
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Date: 9/1/2012 8:02:00 PM
wow Gale love it,I wouldn't want to return,welcome
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Gale Greenwood
Date: 9/1/2012 9:09:00 PM
Thanks Richard. I loved writing this and actually was ready to return, still I wonder . . . Thanks for the comment

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