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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

TRANSCRIPTS visions facts obscure & lightly founded in sensible intelligence naturalistic nothings exaggerated derived from reality in youthful wanderings & conflicted passions presented in strained situations

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/22/2023 1:15:00 PM

a unique write but I like it, Brian. The poem seemed to naturally flow to the last two lines. I rather liked your creation. Have a splendid Sunday, Sara