Transcendent Feelings

His tragic symphony plays its sadistic
melody in my mind consistently.
The arousing masochism that lingers in
this clouded air
knocks on my door with a riveting rivet
that drives me insane incredibly.
Sanity therefore departs my mind
as its "in" brother fights for a reason
to exist in this season of deplorable beauty.
The symphony has now left me in a
tiresome state of nudity,
where everything shines with unbearable
cruelty and a hint of raging novelty,
dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Robillard Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful peice of writing here. So very discriptive. Well done! :)
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:17 PM
Thank you very much Sabrina xD
Lock Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Beautiful piece..I could feel heart and soul through every word..JL
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Thank you JL, that was honestly my initial goal in writing this. Thank you.
St.Cross Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 8:05 PM
‡ I Understand This Place This State Of Mind In Part, Beautiful Precious Ravenn. I Could Venture Into Quite An Extended Moment In Re, Hopelessness And Melancholy And Chains And On And On ? Seek And You Shall Find. Swimming As One Can Unto The Horizon; Reaching For The Sky. Everything Is Going To Alright, Rock A By, Rock A By - Beautiful Poem. Truly. Love, Rachel ‡
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Thank you so much Rachel, your opinions and compliments are greatly appreciated :)
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