Tranquility Belied

Fall trees stand empty,
water washed away their souls.
Wasted reflections.


For tranquility contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:31 PM
beautiful yet sad haiku--I could picture this in my mind---each line carries itself, thanks for sharing JT :)
Mehta Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 12:56 AM
A fine meaningful haiku
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April 17, 2010 at 6:43 AM
This is how I felt about the photo, too, John. I saw dying trees and they did not make me feel peaceful, just sad. You have a beautiful haiku here! Love, Carolyn
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