Tranquility-

in buoyant ease

sun comes to rest on home hearth....

moon flies on alone



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for Shadow's "Beauty" contest
1/20/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:38 PM
love this - congrats on your wins too : )
Oyewole Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 11:00 AM
I think this one captures the fullness of the soul when one sees a sunset and is greeted by a beautiful white full moon. So glad you were recognized in this contest. I think your words capture the emotions behind the beauty. Nice.
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Beautiful expressions on beauty and congrats on the win, Carrie
Sivey Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:34 PM
This is an exceptional write written by an expert my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Breathtaking beauty, dear. I love it!
Hamilton Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 7:26 PM
enchanting Carrie ty for supporting my contest congrats on placing in my contest Beauty Shadow x smile hug
Tacito Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Yes...absolutely yes. Wonderful!
Chircop Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 3:40 PM
So so beautiful
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