Trance Adrift

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September 9, 2023

Contest : A Hypnagogic Dream

Sponsored by : Suzette Richards

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The mute sense dazed by trance adrift elusive,
never wavers a moment to lacerate
the endangered dormant psyche unwary.
Contrived by passion dream of pale possession,
sapped by nascent sunrays curtain pores suck in.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Subimal! …sapped by nascent sunrays

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2023 3:36:00 AM

Thank you, Kim.

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/6/2023 1:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Subimal. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette