Maurice Yvonne Poet Verse

Trained In Love

Love you 
Each single day
I do

Doing
My best always
To tame
 
Taming
My beating heart
To hear

Hearing
Your words, your thoughts
Your life

Living
We twice as well
As one

Oneness
Is a blessing 
We Share

Sharing
Is the dictum
Practiced

Practice
Makes perfect, yet 
Stays flawed

Our flaws
Teach us lessons
Absorbed

Absorb
Life's examples
Wisely

Wisdom
A lifetime quest
We seek

Seeking 
With joy and want
We find

Finding
Is the toughest
Challenge

Challenged
We persevere 
Daily

 Our days
We live out well
A pair

Us Paired
We emerge strong
We do

19~12~2014
Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux
Contest Name: Mussetle Train

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Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:00 PM Nice win Maurice...PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 10, 2015 at 12:08 AM You have perfected this form, Armand! I'm sure your train is the longest on the winner's list and your last stanza is just as good as your first. My favorite stanza, "oneness is a blessing we share" is heartfelt and touching...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Abdul Malik Mandani January 6, 2015 at 12:02 PM A good one. Many congrats.

Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 11:44 PM This is wonderful,congrats Maurice...huggs

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2015 at 11:08 PM dang, I hoped to see this one in top three, ARmand!! congrats for the win. It was splendid!

Sandra Haight January 5, 2015 at 5:12 PM Hi Maurice, really liked your train ride! Excellent words within the form along with wisdom and advice! Congrats on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 4:49 PM Well done Mr train driver! I can see that you have been well trained! Congratulations on this fine win, Armand! // paul

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 4:01 PM Dropping back with my congrats Armand:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:27 PM I vasselated on this one, it just as easily could have been a third place finish. I am pleased to see your name on my winners list.

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2014 at 2:04 AM I agree with Charmaine here. This is sure to be a top winner, Maurice. a 7!! (you really nailed it)

Charmaine Chircop December 20, 2014 at 12:46 AM I think We'll see this with the top winners..A favourite!Too many exceptional lines!!Charma

David Meade December 19, 2014 at 1:29 PM I felt the power in this locomotive -- I saw your smiling face hanging out of the big engine -- hair blowing and you singing at the top of your voice! Nothing stopping this train -- well done dear brother.

Jan Allison December 19, 2014 at 1:08 PM Love the sentiment and flow here Maurice - i think this will do well with Richard:-) hugs Jan xx