Bl Devnath Poet Lanterne

Train Whistles

train
                                                     whistles
                                                starts running
                                            through the track of
                                                         rail

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Skat A May 27, 2015 at 9:25 AM Awesome scenario

Donna Jones March 8, 2015 at 12:01 PM Love the feel of this poem ....

Deb Wilson March 7, 2015 at 1:36 AM very descriptive in few words...hugs,Deb Bl Devnath March 7, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks a lot for your visit to my page and for your beautiful comment. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2015 at 6:17 PM Long time no see, BL. I just saw a poem Jan did and she said it was inspired by one of yours so I am looking for that one of yours. Maybe I better go back to Jan's and see if she gave a title of yours!! Bl Devnath March 6, 2015 at 7:21 PM My lovely friend, that was funny poem so i deleted it. That was a pure joke. Thanks for your visit. Loved always,bl