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Train Station

A train arrives every other minute. Every other minute rushing, competing with the next to past. Past, passing by, people crossing paths but never really meeting. Meeting, almost; never met. Met yet never known, or forgotten. Forgotten, left behind. The right things always left behind The wrong things never forgotten. Forgotten how heavy our suitcases are. Are the trains arriving? Arriving, leaving. Endless doorways that connect yet separate. We meet, we met, we forgot, we left behind, we arrived, we left, we separated. Every other minute past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/31/2013 1:43:00 PM
I'd love to rate your poem with a 14. Too bad a 7 is high as I can go! This is cleverly written. Congratulations on your featured writing!...Milt
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Zin Lim
Date: 8/1/2013 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 7/29/2013 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem love your view on this piece! Laura :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:19:00 PM
Zin, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Zin Lim
Date: 8/1/2013 9:12:00 PM
Hi! thank you for the warm welcome, though sorry for the late reply :/ hugs back*
Date: 7/9/2013 12:21:00 AM
HI Zim Lim, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:24:00 AM
- Hello Zin - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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