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Train Love

Swaying, 
Rocking, 
Like water against a boat
Her unfamiliar fragrance snatches sense with every whiff.
Tall and exquisite.

I sat watching 
Her slender frame stately set
against traveling commonalities
Who, in comparison,
were a mere eyesore
 than equivalent.

Had I been an artisan, 
Canvases would walk and speak

Up, she looked
 Our eyes entwined—
An instant connection,
Train Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 4/10/2016 1:49:00 AM
taalib brown, awesome poem. linda
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:14:00 PM
TAALIB, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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